Dann Rei did an Awesome job with the first draft, but I still felt Fyre needed to have major focus for this cover. That could only be done if the the current rough draft had to be altered. I sent Dan a rough of what I had in mind & she inturn sent me here version which I found nailed all the characters pretty well, just needed a few details to be added. Here’s the exchange me & Dann had.

Rought draft sent by me Dann's response to my draft